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Nice sprite, you should make a sheet!
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Meh....could be better. ( explain below)
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8 53.33%
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Custom Baby Yoshi
#1
Whew....my first custom, what do you think of it, should I make a sheet?

[Image: BabyYoshi.png]
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#2
This is in the wrong section buddy. This is for whole Projects and not a Sheet. It actally looks pretty cool, but looks a bit weird considering he has a white stomach on a semi-white background of the Forums. But the Shading isn't too bad. Just try get the shape of the body a bit more round, or bolder, I guess...
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#3
NOT A PROJECT

To Sprite Discussion it goes.
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#4
put it on a dark background and it'll look better

the head looks okay, but the body looks odd.
[Image: ndsMEF0.gif][Image: sig.gif]
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#5
Head looks too much like normal yoshi, feet are weird, the arms shading is messed up and it should be darker.
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#6
With black:
[Image: By.png]
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#7
tbqh it looks like you took a regular yoshi's head and made a terible body for it
[Image: ndsMEF0.gif][Image: sig.gif]
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#8
its supposed to be chibi style!
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#9
Well if it's chibi, you might want to give it a bigger head.
[Image: 14.gif]
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#10
Also, you would make the eyes black with white shines if it was chibi
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#11
I think it looks good, but the nose should be a perfect circle even in the bottom left corner. Body might look better if just a little fatter, shoes look kinda light in colour.

Also, a bigger remake would be nice. You're allowed more room for details with bigger sprites so you could make it a lot better.
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#12
(03-27-2009, 06:36 AM)Neslug Wrote: I think it looks good, but the nose should be a perfect circle even in the bottom left corner. Body might look better if just a little fatter, shoes look kinda light in colour.

Also, a bigger remake would be nice. You're allowed more room for details with bigger sprites so you could make it a lot better.

I'll try it, thanks
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#13
One sprite is hard to make inferences on your spriting ability. Make some other basic poses to show us so we can give you some better C+C
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#14
(03-30-2009, 07:52 PM)Azure Fox Wrote: One sprite is hard to make inferences on your spriting ability. Make some other basic poses to show us so we can give you some better C+C

Ok, I will Smile
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#15
I think it's a great sprite. But one good sprite is only worthy of an avatar, if I were you I'd make a sheet. Wink
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