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Really small luigi
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#2
Left (are right arm) is too long, and the feet are really weird. Not a huge fan of the colors.
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#3
dude, it's a cartoony style, what do you expect. i think it's kinda cool, but i just think it should have more things, like walking sprites, jumping sprites, etc,still a not bad style. kinda cool
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(03-16-2009, 08:17 PM)link5205 Wrote: dude, it's a cartoony style, what do you expect. i think it's kinda cool, but i just think it should have more things, like walking sprites, jumping sprites, etc,still a not bad style. kinda cool

Style isn't an excuse to make a sprite bad. Now I'm not saying the sprites bad, it just needs to be fixed up.
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#5
yeah, Paris' right. Right now, the sprite looks ugly. He's unbalanced, is blocky and the colors aren't that great.
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#6
The head would be good with better colours and if the hat was edited a little bit, but the body needs to be re-done. :/
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[Image: reallysmallluigi.png]
Lower one is new thanks for the crits
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#8
The sprite seems a bit too small for my taste, and that is WAY too much colors for such a small thing. The palette could be better too, seems too yellow at the moment.
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#9
Ill try it with only 3 shades per color.
[Image: reallysmallluigi.png] Upper right is new sorry for the double post
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#10
3 shades per color is still way too much. Small sprites don't need a lot of colors.
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#11
2 colors per shade Happy now? [Image: reallysmallluigi.png]
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#12
Looks pretty good, better than what I can currently do. But his left foot looks a lil big.
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#13
OK. Ill fix that.
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#14
BUMP because I need more crits
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#15
I'd suggest you make the body slightly bigger. It's as big as his head.
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