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Super Toad Kart
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Hooray my first upload!!!Big Grin Enjoy
[Image: finaltoad.png]
Did I forget somethin?
GO GO GO!!!!Cute
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Why yes, you did forget something. This is the wrong section completely. Moved.
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Congratulations on your upload!... but this is the Models Resource, 3D stuff. Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource.

Aww. Ninja'd by Shadow.
Lloyd gives us some words of wisdom:
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(06-09-2011, 11:30 PM)edsterisawesome Wrote: Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource.

No, it really shouldn't. You can keep it.



In all seriousness though, let me give some constructive crit rather than just being a jerk.

-Toad is obviously lifted out of something else, not custom made. If you don't want the styles to clash you should make it all from custom.

-Your kart is hard to read. The wing and Toad really clash with the rest because they have a black outline, the rest does not.

-Everything custom made has literally no animation to it. Sure you have that wing flap, but are you honestly telling me you made that wing?

-The fire effect for the speed boost looks more like he's pooping out mustard than boosting.

What I'd try first is to make a Toad and Wing all on your own, then try to animate the Kart, at LEAST make the wheels look like they move.


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