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Super Toad Kart - qwizzy555 - 06-09-2011
Hooray my first upload!!!
Enjoy![[Image: finaltoad.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi1191.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fz476%2Fqwizzy555%2Ffinaltoad.png&hash=a8b20b3c9b7a66b67923dd0cffd92b99)
Did I forget somethin?
RE: Super Toad Kart - Shadowth117 - 06-09-2011
Why yes, you did forget something. This is the wrong section completely. Moved.
RE: Super Toad Kart - edsterisawesome - 06-09-2011
Congratulations on your upload!... but this is the Models Resource, 3D stuff. Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource.
Aww. Ninja'd by Shadow.
RE: Super Toad Kart - TomGuycott - 06-09-2011
(06-09-2011, 11:30 PM)edsterisawesome Wrote: Yours should go in the Spriter's Resource.
No, it really shouldn't. You can keep it.
In all seriousness though, let me give some constructive crit rather than just being a jerk.
-Toad is obviously lifted out of something else, not custom made. If you don't want the styles to clash you should make it all from custom.
-Your kart is hard to read. The wing and Toad really clash with the rest because they have a black outline, the rest does not.
-Everything custom made has literally no animation to it. Sure you have that wing flap, but are you honestly telling me you made that wing?
-The fire effect for the speed boost looks more like he's pooping out mustard than boosting.
What I'd try first is to make a Toad and Wing all on your own, then try to animate the Kart, at LEAST make the wheels look like they move.