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#1
07-23-2010, 08:11 AM (This post was last modified: 08-11-2010, 11:31 AM by Sinkin.)
Yao! As a new member here at Spriters-Resource I want to show you people my current skill level in spriting and by doing so I made a sprite that proves my skill. So, by any means please give me feedback on what I should improve at this one and for my skill in spriting. Also, when you are giving me feedback be specific of what I should change. Thanks. Smile

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07-23-2010, 08:27 AM
Hey, I recognize you... You're from ZFGC, was it? In any case, Welcome to tSR!
About that sprite... I haven't really got any complaints.

All I can say is I hope you'll stay for a while. Smile
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#3
07-23-2010, 08:44 AM
Thanks for the greeting! Yeah, I'm from ZFGC, are you a member there and if so under which name? Smile
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#4
07-23-2010, 10:26 AM
I'm sorry for the double post, but I want to notify about my new sprite of Link. Feedback?

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#5
07-23-2010, 10:31 AM
I gotta say the simplicity is really cool, and it's a neat style to boot.
Interesting works, keep going at it, I say.

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#6
07-23-2010, 10:35 AM
Thank you! I'll try to keep going as far as I can. Smile
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#7
07-23-2010, 10:38 AM
Mario's body seems a little large and un-Mario-like somehow and his eyes are pretty far apart.
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07-23-2010, 10:40 AM
(07-23-2010, 10:38 AM)Neslug Wrote: Mario's body seems a little large and un-Mario-like somehow and his eyes are pretty far apart.

Large in what way? More specific feedback would be good.
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#9
07-23-2010, 10:45 AM
His head is usually just slightly bigger than his torso. You've got it reversed. This also gives him less of a Mario feeling and more of a grown-man (with more realistic proportions) in a Mario costume type of feel, if that makes any sense.
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07-23-2010, 10:51 AM (This post was last modified: 07-23-2010, 11:10 AM by Sinkin.)
Yep, I understand, I'll try to fix it right away.

EDIT: Did a small edit at the eyes and at the body. Any better?

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#11
07-23-2010, 02:13 PM
Pretty nice style seems very RPG-ish, I like Link better since it resembles Minish cap to me in some way, and Mario is too tall
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#12
07-23-2010, 03:05 PM
Yeah, Mario is still a bit tall, could make him one or two pixels shorter and redo the head so it's a bit bigger. Anyway, thanks for the good feedback guys! Smile
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#13
07-23-2010, 06:57 PM
I'd like to see a walking cycle for link Smile

or adult link
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#14
07-23-2010, 07:15 PM
Same here, the link sprite looks really well done, and it looks like it can even be made in a sprite sheet actually.
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#15
07-23-2010, 07:30 PM
i'd wait a bit more until we can see more sprites to actually state an opinion
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