05-03-2014, 01:14 PM
Welp, everybody else beat me to pretty much everything but I made a quick edit
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I agree with what has been said about the perspective; it looks pretty odd for his head to be completely sideways when his body is at a 3/4 perspective. (I unfortunately didn't make a fix for that sorry)
I did make a fix for his hat though-- the shape have there makes it seem as if it's frontward-ish? it's a tad odd (I blame it on berets and their totally unidentifiable shapes). In any case, I did my best to imagine what it'd look like from the side.
I also made some fixes on the eye. Don't mind the patch around it too much, I just though it'd look cool. That said, it does help the eye stick out better. IMO, it looks kind of strange how the pupil just blends into the sclera like that, so I made a fix for that.
The angle the collar of his shirt takes is kind of weird, so I fixed that up (made it more like your picture's collar, too). I think the undershirt shows the shape of his torso now with a little less shading on that right corner. Oh, I also changed the tails angle since it looks more squirrel-like standing more upwards like that (I used a couple of squirrel images from google for reference). That's mostly subjective though, so you don't really have to bother with that.
I agree with what has been said about the perspective; it looks pretty odd for his head to be completely sideways when his body is at a 3/4 perspective. (I unfortunately didn't make a fix for that sorry)
I did make a fix for his hat though-- the shape have there makes it seem as if it's frontward-ish? it's a tad odd (I blame it on berets and their totally unidentifiable shapes). In any case, I did my best to imagine what it'd look like from the side.
I also made some fixes on the eye. Don't mind the patch around it too much, I just though it'd look cool. That said, it does help the eye stick out better. IMO, it looks kind of strange how the pupil just blends into the sclera like that, so I made a fix for that.
The angle the collar of his shirt takes is kind of weird, so I fixed that up (made it more like your picture's collar, too). I think the undershirt shows the shape of his torso now with a little less shading on that right corner. Oh, I also changed the tails angle since it looks more squirrel-like standing more upwards like that (I used a couple of squirrel images from google for reference). That's mostly subjective though, so you don't really have to bother with that.