(11-10-2008, 06:20 PM)Dex Wrote: Not to be a dick, but I've edited your sprite to show you what you could do to help it get even better.



quick edit, I:

-hue-shifted and changed the colors
-removed the awful black outline
-improved jaggies
-changed shading

g'luck

one problem, not M&L style

He actually said "I'm not going for ML style," dude.

I'm not, but I think that's a little drastic. Good, but drastic.

I vote Dex 2nd best spriter here after BAB who agrees

also I like the sprite how it was, tbqh
I, for one, like black outlines and think it looks great

I like it.

I hate the feet. Have at it.

Aside from the feet, I think it's great.

(11-10-2008, 08:14 PM)Vipershark Wrote: I vote Dex 2nd best spriter here after BAB who agrees

also I like the sprite how it was, tbqh
I, for one, like black outlines and think it looks great

Much like BaB's, Dex's spriting level is overrated.


But still pretty good.

Not so much shading errors, but ML has a very bouncy, smooth, and circular lineart design.

how many times does he have to say that he isn't doing M&L style?

Well, if you reallly want to make it good then make the outline black.

(11-11-2008, 11:51 AM)Vipershark Wrote: how many times does he have to say that he isn't doing M&L style?

How many people don't realize palette and lineart are interlinked to theme?

(11-11-2008, 11:51 AM)Vipershark Wrote: how many times does he have to say that he isn't doing M&L style?

The problem here is determining what "kind of M&L style, but not really" actually is and what it means, as that's the main root of the misunderstanding.

(11-11-2008, 12:49 PM)Badassbill Wrote:

(11-11-2008, 11:51 AM)Vipershark Wrote: how many times does he have to say that he isn't doing M&L style?

How many people don't realize palette and lineart are interlinked to theme?

M&L has specific shading styles and AA on the lineart.
This uses none of that.

Just because someone uses the palette doesn't qualify it as a certain style. I could take your avatar and recolor it with the Minish Cap palette, but would that make it MC style? No.

Besides, the character isn't even from M&L. He's from Paper Mario.

(11-11-2008, 01:14 PM)Vipershark Wrote:

(11-11-2008, 12:49 PM)Badassbill Wrote:

(11-11-2008, 11:51 AM)Vipershark Wrote: how many times does he have to say that he isn't doing M&L style?

How many people don't realize palette and lineart are interlinked to theme?

M&L has specific shading styles and AA on the lineart.
This uses none of that.

Just because someone uses the palette doesn't qualify it as a certain style. I could take your avatar and recolor it with the Minish Cap palette, but would that make it MC style? No.

Besides, the character isn't even from M&L. He's from Paper Mario.

I think you need to go back and read what I said.