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#1
I am doing clean kirby for the Super Star Ultra Project and I am done with the first frame: Here is also the lineart, which I suck at, can someone help me??

[Image: Kirby-4.png]

Yes, the broom is supposed to be that small in the first frame. Look at SNES in the spirter's resource: Kirby's Dreamland 3. And you will find it


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#2
That's not in style at all, and is pretty bad.
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#3
Yeah, ok. Can you tell me exactly what I need to do, because that didnt help me that much.
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#4
Wow that broom is tiny as hell.

What the fuck is he cleaning?

Anyway it's not in style, and the overall quality is bad. Try again.
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#5
Its an attack and it is the first frame. Ok, I will try again. The broom gets bigger in the second frame.

[Image: Kirby-3.png]
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#6
Instead of getting bigger,the broom should look like its sweeping.Plus, Kirby's outline looks too jagged and out of style.Fix that up.
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#7
Ok too jagged. I will fix that. I think what you mean by the fact that is doesnt look like it is sweeping is because the bottom broom half isnt going backwards. I will change that



Here are the original sprites, notice how the broom gets bigger:

[Image: Kirby-4.png]
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#8
Why don't you just use the KSSU sprite?
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#9
is that supposed to be in this style?: http://www.spriters-resource.com/snes/ki...sheet/2884

If so I'd do what Paris said and base it off of the actual in game Kirby first
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#10
I'd say that would be the best thing to do and just try editing it.
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#11
Ok, I thought it was Kirby Advance style which was the project's point.
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#12
I personally like it, but that's my opinion..............
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#13
It's not in Kirby Advances it's in Kirby Super Star Ultra Style.

There are differences.
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#14
Oh ok.
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