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The Pixels Of Joxon
1: Sure, it's fine.

2: Nope.

3: Only one I see here that's received no comments is that red-armored chick, and the only real problem I have with her is she looks banded.
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Oh jeez... It's a dude. Please tell me that was just a misinterpretation and he can acctually be read as a dude. PS I meant ANY of the sprites that need work that have or hasn't been critique.
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Just so you know, i'm not dead. Cute Swimming animation. I tried to have him hols his breath but i couldn't get it to look right, so I left it alone.
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So, I tried a sprite for Medli, but it didn't turn out as well as Id hope.
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She from a Zelda game? I think the only real problem is her ponytail and her arms. The rest looks fine to me.
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Also, the beak could be bigger to close the gap between it and the mouth.
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Yes, she is from a Zelda. Game, Wind Waker. I couldn't quite figure out what was wrong with the ponytail, so I just left it alone for now. IDK about the arms that much either.
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The arms could be less bent so they look more at rest instead of looking like she's carrying invisible suitcases. The ponytail shouldn't stick out as far as it does.
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How's this?
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Better! Now that I look at it, the shoulders could also be thinner.
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Hm?
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Double post, upward attack.
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It uses poses from the regular attacks, but both have the same basic motion.
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Hey, Joxon! Have you ever tried compiling your animations into .GIFs? They are much easier to critique when we can see the animation in motion. Your animation looks a little stiff to me, but I can't say for sure until I see it animated.
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I apologize, but since I make this stuff on Sprite Something on my iPod, I can't use GIFS because iPods don't seem to support GIFS. I'll post a gif through my PC in a little.

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maybe you should try something like marths u-tilt?

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