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You know, about the arms. The should stick out to it's front and at the ends the should be cloth hanging down, kinda. By what I mean... it should go straight forward and at some point it should suddenly go straight downward.
Also, the left (its left) Arm looks weird.
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#17
Fix up some parts of the outline, it looks sketchy.
Also the colours need to be duller.
But it's a good start.
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(08-11-2008, 05:54 AM)Rakia Wrote: Fix up some parts of the outline, it looks sketchy.
Also the colours need to be duller.
But it's a good start.
Ok, I left out the back spikes or whatever they are out, because it was making the sprite look bad, so judge without the spikes, And I fixed a lot,
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#19
Ehh... I liked it better with the spikes, 'cuz now it looks like a baby Yoshi ghost...
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#20
Haha, that's really awesome. It might look flatter if you got rid of the highlights on the nose, but idk , looks really nice either way. :>
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(08-11-2008, 06:38 PM)Miles07 Wrote: Ehh... I liked it better with the spikes, 'cuz now it looks like a baby Yoshi ghost...
LOL, I will put them back on but I just wanted to judge without for a change.

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