Paper Mario Eerie

[CeeY]

I find PM a fun style, and im having success with it recently, so I decided to do this PM style Eerie, C+C Please,

[gangster guy]

Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

[Shroob2]

the body should be a little less... fat... and the nose/snout/mouth thing should be a little bigger. It looks like they're one and the same.

[Solink]

I find PM a fun style, and im having success with it recently, so I decided to do this PM style Flurry, C+C Please,

Pretty good
but the nose need to be rounder and the eyes bigger+what the others said

[CeeY]

Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a little smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

[Solink]

Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a ittle smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

[CeeY]

Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a ittle smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

Well it has to look like it is supposed to, that is the only REF I have, and I fixed more,

[gangster guy]

It should look like It's sticking it's arms out, like a zombie.

[CeeY]

It should look like It's sticking it's arms out, like a zombie.

Well they are as far as they need to be, what are Eeries anyway, they looked like Dead Fish O__o, well here as an update,

[2ndLtHavoc]

i think the tail should be a bit bigger

[CeeY]

i think the tail should be a bit bigger

Update: made the tail bigger,

[Elyk]

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

I'm pretty sure that's the only game it was in, so that would be the only reference.

The back arm is too long.

[CeeY]

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

I'm pretty sure that's the only game it was in, so that would be the only reference.

The back arm is too long.

Made it smaller,

[Kitsu]

It fits the style pretty well. However, his head seems to be facing a different direction from his body. Maybe make his underbelly more round?

BTW, I think Eerie is supposed to be a dinosaur ghost; it is on Dinosaur Island, after all...

[Raytheon]

Put less shading on the blue part