Custom Zelda Series - Navi and other fairies

[rayman18]

Hi everybody

I'm new here, but I'm used to use sprites from here

And I searched for a sprite sheet of navi and I haven't found one...

The only one I found wasn't good to animate it...

So I decided to make mine

And heres what it looks like :



Hope you like it,

I wish it will be posted on TSR,
if not, I hope I'll know what I have to improve

Have a nice day ^^

[Gors]

someone told to me once: when the credit tag is half of the sprite sheet, then it's not good. And again, it proves to be right.

this don't seem to be sprited, and it looks like it's going to animate poorly. The shading is alright, though. What you need to do is reducing the number of colors and making the wings simmetric.

[Rakia]

I like fairy that gives hearts, make it give me some hearts

[LeleleleMAXIMUM]

Way too blurry.

[rayman18]

someone told to me once: when the credit tag is half of the sprite sheet, then it's not good. And again, it proves to be right.

this don't seem to be sprited, and it looks like it's going to animate poorly. The shading is alright, though. What you need to do is reducing the number of colors and making the wings simmetric.

Thanks for the tips

I Reduce the text and the credits to the minimum,
I put the wings symetric
And I reduce the color mode to 256 colors,
The only thing you weren't right, is that it was animating greatly...

Anyway...

So there is the (first but surely not the last...) update of my sprite sheet :


Hope I won't have much to change this time

Have a nice day

[Gors]

yeah, the sheet is visually better now. But yeah, the sprites looked better before. Maybe you should use a oval-shaped wings instead of a thick line?

Also, there still are a lot of colors. Pixel art often works with a handful of colors, so you could remove some without looking bad.

[rayman18]

Maybe you should use a oval-shaped wings instead of a thick line?
Also, there still are a lot of colors.

Thank you so much !

I think I made something nearly perfect (I can imagine what I want XD)

I reduce the shadow and I made the oval-shaped wings and it looks way better


I wish you like it too ^.^

[Stirred Drei Ling]

Much better! Though you can still have some visible shading on the wings, still looks great regardless!

[rayman18]

Ok, I think my sheet is now done :



I reduce the colors I needed at the maximum

And the oval-shaped wings make the fairies really great

Do you think it could be submit to TSR ?

[Black Boo]

The wings honestly seem a bit large.