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For those who remember me, I left this site for a while to improve my "art style". I hope you can see a difference in my sprite talent. Please comment truthfully. (NOTE: I tried to develop my own way of spriting, please tell me how it looks.
Red Mario Mushroom
![[Image: Red-Mushroom.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi665.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fvv13%2FClear_Midnight%2FRed-Mushroom.png&hash=46ba36a002d9e6dfde52dd9f5831c105)
Firestar (Warriors books by Erin Hunter, if you heard of them)
![[Image: Firestar-1.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi665.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fvv13%2FClear_Midnight%2FFirestar-1.png&hash=eb387a2494493ce963a71e5800e13fe4)
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06-11-2009, 09:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-11-2009, 09:12 PM by Zac.)
They are okay. The Firestar is alot better than the mushroom. A good way to improve the little dog would to get rid of all that dithering and shade in blotches, insted of lines.
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Poll was super pointless. Sprites are beginner quality, but touch up the dog and I'll comment on it then.
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may it be a bit off topic, but i'm just curious about the "class C spriter" legend.
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06-11-2009, 09:19 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-11-2009, 09:23 PM by 13 Heart.)
I love Warriors!And Red Mario Mushroom looks good.Also Firestar is a cat.
Edit:Me explain later.
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06-11-2009, 09:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-11-2009, 09:23 PM by Lone_Wolf.)
(06-11-2009, 09:17 PM)DigiTamer Metaru Wrote: may it be a bit off topic, but i'm just curious about the "class C spriter" legend.
Lol, yeah i was trying to make a good banner one day when I thought
"why don't I rate myself?" I though I wasn't good enough to be a B or an A, but not bad enough for D or F. So I ended up with C. The quote is something I always try to do. Trying is the only way to get better.
(06-11-2009, 09:19 PM)Pokejoey-Pokemon Pyrite Wrote: I love Warriors!And Red Mario Mushroom looks good.Also Firestar is a cat.
Yeah! It's my favorite series! It would be great if there was a video game. Sadly there isn't. Thanks for the comment.
(06-11-2009, 09:17 PM)Zee Wrote: Poll was super pointless. Sprites are beginner quality, but touch up the dog and I'll comment on it then.
I'll work on it.
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if thats the case you should be around Class F...
that looks somehow like a trace of the maple story pets.
