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CAPTAIN FARUKOOOOON
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Something about it seems off to me....Can I have some c+c please Smile ?
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It looks good, but I think the left arm is too long. Try lengthening the torso...
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#3
his head is massive and it seems somewhat cluttered.
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#4
Fuck this is actually pretty wicked to me, but I agree some proportions seem slightly off.
Arms mainly.

The head may be purposefully larger, but the arms are two different lengths. Keep the left arm that size and bring the forearm back, or keep the right arm that size and lengthen the left.
Tsunami Bomb - The Simple Truth
We could run away
Leave behind anything paper
Not knowing where we're going to stay
When there's no Mondays

You're part of me, it's so easy to see the simple truth
When I'm in your arms, I feel safe from harm and sorrow too
You're part of me, it's so easy to see the simple truth
But most of all, nothing couldn't be solved when I'm with you
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#5
its all about proportions.

but i doubt you were aiming for something like "Viewtiful joe" or stuff like that.
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#6
Update - [Image: captainfarukoooon.gif]

Sorry about the slightly big bump but I made an update Smile.
Made arm shorter and made his face look less cluttered.
The head size I decided to keep because its part of the style....and because I couldn't make it shorter without screwing it up anyways.

Thank you all for the wonderful comments, really appreciated Smile.
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