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#1
05-17-2009, 03:59 PM
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=rbe3r7&s=5
My goomba sheet
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05-17-2009, 04:02 PM (This post was last modified: 05-17-2009, 04:03 PM by [robo9].)
Well um....I do believe you have to have post the topic in the Discussion, and have a mod move it to this part of the forum.... I do believe it needs to be redone, since the line art needs major reworking. It loks as if it was drawn, not sprited. And I have never seen shading be in the shape of a straight line, sorry.
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05-17-2009, 04:12 PM
(05-17-2009, 04:02 PM)PKMN TRAINER BROWN Wrote: Well um....I do believe you have to have post the topic in the Discussion, and have a mod move it to this part of the forum.... I do believe it needs to be redone, since the line art needs major reworking. It loks as if it was drawn, not sprited. And I have never seen shading be in the shape of a straight line, sorry.

Good idea...
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#4
05-17-2009, 04:54 PM
This is pretty terrible. To Sprite Discussion it goes.
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#5
05-17-2009, 07:49 PM
Well um...where to being.


I guess you kinda just drew the Goomba with a pencil tool. Bad idea. Right now he looks like a giant penis with feet and eyebrows. Did you use a reference at all?


Also MS paint defaults are bad. Avoid them.


TBH I don't even really know how to crit this besides what I said above. It just really, really bad. =/
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#6
05-17-2009, 07:53 PM
I can't criticize on it, it's just, ugh. Blank
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