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King Dedede
#16
Looks pillowshaded, the blue and brown (hammer) need to be more vivid.
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#17
(01-18-2010, 02:33 AM)Bazzoka Wrote: Me thinks the main problem of the sprite is the fact that the outlines inside the sprite are sttill as black. I'm not seeing that much in the other sprites. :V

^This hard.
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#18
i see what everyone means ill take another crack at it in a bit

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is this any better if not some else give it a try
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#19
Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.
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#20
(01-18-2010, 09:23 PM)Airicy Wrote: Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.
its too smallBig Grin
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#21
It looks way too dirty
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(01-18-2010, 09:58 PM)Phantom K Wrote: It looks way too dirty
i see what you mean he is harder than he looksSmile
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#23
Amen.
I figured it'd be one of the easiest ones. D;
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#24
i gave it another try hows it look now


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#25
Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

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#26
(01-20-2010, 10:44 PM)Phantom K Wrote: Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

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looks good but the mouth looks kinda ridged
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#27
yeah, the mouth and hat are pretty bad, and it needs general work everywhere
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#28
i don't know why but he seems impossible to get right
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#29
[Image: 2cesrpu.png]
fixed up the mouth
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#30
(01-20-2010, 11:00 PM)Phantom K Wrote: [Image: 2cesrpu.png]
fixed up the mouth
nice but there's one pixel that needs darken up on his mouth cause it looks like a tooth
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