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I want to know what is wrong with sprites if it is pixel art or location.
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The back looks weird. If this is supposed to be Super Mario World style (not that it's consistent, but I digress), there are already two really good examples officially already that you can reference.
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These sprites look good, but the problems I see are this:

- The eyes are just blue, maybe you could try to add some black pupils to make his eyes look better.
- The hair on the front and back sides doesn't look right

You could try observing this 3D model for Larry Koopa: https://www.models-resource.com/wii/news...odel/2244/
Hopefully, it'll give you a reference and idea on some better sprites for his front and back sides.

Also, I like the idea for this sheet too, Larry's my second favorite koopaling and I'm glad to see people are making sprites for them :)
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(07-02-2020, 08:32 AM)DogToon64 Wrote: These sprites look good, but the problems I see are this:

- The eyes are just blue, maybe you could try to add some black pupils to make his eyes look better.
- The hair on the front and back sides doesn't look right

You could try observing this 3D model for Larry Koopa: https://www.models-resource.com/wii/news...odel/2244/
Hopefully, it'll give you a reference and idea on some better sprites for his front and back sides.

Also, I like the idea for this sheet too, Larry's my second favorite koopaling and I'm glad to see people are making sprites for them Smile
I tried it and there was nothing wrong Thumbs Up , I really liked your problem solving but I was already satisfied with the one from before so it stays like this. I am a beginner in this sprite but I can improve with time. Tongue
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(07-02-2020, 02:11 PM)JosueCr4ft Wrote: I tried it and there was nothing wrong Thumbs Up , I really liked your problem solving but I was already satisfied with the one from before so it stays like this. I am a beginner in this sprite but I can improve with time. Tongue

Well that's no good. Beginner or not, make effort with the suggestions people give you when they critique your work.

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(07-02-2020, 02:43 AM)SmithyGCN Wrote: The back looks weird. If this is supposed to be Super Mario World style (not that it's consistent, but I digress), there are already two really good examples officially already that you can reference.
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I agree with Observer. If you were going to go ahead with the way it is now, why did you ask for critique?
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