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Nate's Little Mash Of Pixels(Need Crit)
#31
This should do it.
Thanks Shade!


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#32
I don't know why, but the feet almost look pillow shaded to me.
(02-27-2014, 07:31 PM)Gors Wrote: DO NOT BE AFRAID TO SUCK. DO NOT BE AFRAID TO SHOW YOUR SUCKY ART. I think this needs to go noticed to everyone, because sucking is not failing. Sucking is part of the fun of learning and if you don't suck, then you won't own at pixelart

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#33
Here's Another One.
I put the Little shine on his forehead like in Kirby Super Star.
Along with some little fixes.


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Quick edit to showcase things I know I'll poorly explain.
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The two most important things I changed were the left arm and foot. I rounded out where the arm meets the body to showcase Kirby's spherical proportions and I changed the foot to better connect with the body, as well as the shading to be better affected by the source of light.
Oh, and I also, to try and add a little more depth, completely filled in the opposite limbs with the darkest color appropriate to that specific part.
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#35
I'm Back.
Okay, I went for a Walking animation as an experiment.
I REALLY Need C+C For the Walking cycle.
Anything's Fine with me.


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#36
Well, this is an attempt at motion blur.
C+C is Needed.
Hope you guys like it.


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#37
The dark colors used in the blur would take away from the animation. The blur should be the same color as whatever's moving in the animation. You could also benefit from more frames.
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#38
Thanks for the tip.
Meh, I went for size instead of motion blur. bigger means better.
Testing out new frontiers.


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#39
Could you do us all a favor and link your attachments instead of just leaving them thumbnailed at the bottom of the post, please? Or use an image host?
Clicking the blurry thumbnails is annoying.
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