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Sonikku no Wip
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Hello everyone. I'm MCPencils on the bored here. I'm Also known as MCKaosu, the creator of the sprite sheet that I'm going to show you. Its something I've been working on and off of for a wile. I plan to make a well animated and usable Sonic sprite sheet.

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I'd love to hear some criticism from you all, I really want to make this as well as possible, and any good Ideas will be appreciated too.
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#2
Those look sweet. Keep up the good work (ADD SUPER SONIC!!!)
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#3
Wow. This is actually very good. And I say actually, because a majority of sonic sheets aren't good :P

the skin could use another shade for AAing. otherwise, no complaints :>
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#4
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This is actually pretty good...

I would recommend to use brighter colors, 'cus those are a tad dull imo, and you should try sum hue-shift Smile
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#5
awesome Surprise
but yeah, fix what Dark said
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#6
Best Sonic custom I've seen in a while.

And after reading the title, I was expecting Sonikku the member.
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#7
I love this. It's adorable.
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#8
It's pretty good.

I understand what you're trying to do with the hair, making it shift when he turns his head, but it looks a little weird. We should see some animations. :B

I don't think it needs any color changes, hue shifting, etc. It's a good, clean style.
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#9
This is awesome.
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#10
Best custom Sonic i've seen in awhile. And this time, it's a custom style too.
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#11
Have I met you before?

Anyway, great Sonic sprites, though there's a few things buggin' me.

His ball mode isn't perfectly round. Or at least it doesn't look that way on a glance. I don't know if that's a bad thing or a good thing, but it does kinda bother me. Might just be because the shading on it seems off.

His running pose. I see you're going for some mix of new and old Sonic, so it is my opinion that you make him lean into the run much more.

Other than that, no real crits. I love how you did this. Great job.
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#12
I forgot to post crits. His Spinball Pose (The just a ball one) Loks a bit flat. Try ditering the shading a bit on it like the Genesis sprites did, It would make it look better. His muzzle color is too washed out. Try making it more yellow. The whites on his eyes need a bit of shading at the top.

Thats all I can see.
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#13
It's a win! All I think it needs is more animations.
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#14
Add spindash.

Other than that, looks really good. Welcome to TSR!
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#15
These are awesome! WELCOME!
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