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#16
It would be more attractive if the shoes on the Kirby characters were more rounded, just a preference thing with good results.
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#17
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Hi I thought you might have some comments and criticism to share.

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#18
The top part of the hamburger looks kind of strange. Almost like it's wavy or something.
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Is this better? (Old on the right)
#20
Seeing as you give me so much crit, I think it's time I should return the favour Wink
Your Goomba looks really squished, like he's in the middle of being jumped on. Make him a little bit taller so his features aren't so close together.
Also, the coin looks a bit odd in that it has a very narrow bump on the front, yet in the rotating animation's frames, the bump appears to be larger.
It could just be me, but Fat Mario's right arm (our left) looks slightly too close to his dungarees strap.
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#21
I like the Mario tile sprites a lot..

It reminds me of Mario VS donkey kong 2 march of the mini's at the 3rth world (where you could rotate the pipes)
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