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Kirby 64 Planet Selcetion
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08-19-2008, 06:27 PM (This post was last modified: 08-27-2008, 06:25 PM by Elebit.)
Still a WIP, and credit to RTB for the space background (Squeak Squad cutscene; I can't make space...) and the font... well it had no tag... I still need to change the green outline, add a background, and color the arrows... And maybe more...

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C&C please, its for my project to remake Kirby 64.

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Pop Star
Rock Star
Aqua Star
Neo Star
Shiver Star
Ripple Star(dark/restored)
Dark Star
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#2
08-19-2008, 06:28 PM
The lines feel a bit irregular, but the shading and anti-aliasing is nice.
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08-19-2008, 06:29 PM
SHould I make the star more sharp, as in the points??
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08-19-2008, 06:35 PM
No, that's not the issue. I can't help but feel that the black line is of varying thickness.
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08-19-2008, 06:36 PM
Should I make it Yellow or Orange??
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08-19-2008, 08:04 PM
The color seems fine.
Its just the outlining...
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08-19-2008, 08:52 PM
The colors are official...

And by the outline, could you be more detailed?? Should I make the points bigger? Sharper?? I still need to add the rings though...
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08-19-2008, 08:55 PM (This post was last modified: 08-19-2008, 09:02 PM by killme.)
Its a little varied, the out line that is, and could be a little (just a little) bit more pointy
I don't know if this will help or not, but here is some official artwork.
I couldn't find a screenshot.


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08-19-2008, 09:08 PM
Thats the one I used as my refrence lol, thank you.
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08-19-2008, 09:09 PM
(08-19-2008, 09:08 PM)Elebit Wrote: Thats the one I used as my refrence lol, thank you.
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08-19-2008, 09:31 PM
Better?? Its a bit pointier and I added the rings but they are bugging me...
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08-19-2008, 11:48 PM
YES. The rings can be a bit WIDER - farther away from the planet, if you get my meaning. The planet itself is okay... It's just the rings that need tweaking.

Also, there seems to be a little bit of orange (?) near the bottom of the planet, as if you're making it "puffy"... It just doesn't seem right...
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08-20-2008, 12:48 AM (This post was last modified: 08-20-2008, 12:50 AM by Elebit.)
Better?

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#14
08-20-2008, 05:34 AM
This is great =D. Will you make the other stars too?
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08-20-2008, 12:10 PM (This post was last modified: 08-20-2008, 12:10 PM by Miles07.)
(08-19-2008, 06:27 PM)Elebit Wrote: ... its for my project to remake Kirby 64.

I'm guessing yes.

And Pop Star is looking great!
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