Smash Taunts (comic updated daily)

[J-bit]

I'm making a comic so you'll probably hate this but beside's the very long credit's think of it in a good way!

[Alpha Six]

eh... it has potential

[Perigi]

Lol'd at Sonic

[J-bit]

Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.

[J-bit]

Couldn't help waiting to give out issue 3... A few problems.

[dude 2.0]

this is so funny

[Geo the Fox]

Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.

[Alpha Six]

Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.

nevermind

[J-bit]

Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.

Sure.

[mors ontologica]

Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.

Pretty much this. I think if you redid the image of it, it'd be a hell of a lot better. Try and be consistant with things such as colour and layout. Also make sure that within the text bubble, all the letters are completely visible, rather than having the end letters cut off slightly. A re-working and it could be good.

[Alpha Six]

you should also invest in photoshop

[J-bit]

you should also invest in photoshop

That's actually what I'm doing right now.

[GrooveMan.exe]

NO WAY IM HELPING THAT CARNAVOUR

God, learn to spell. If not, use a goddamn spell check.

[Rakia]

What the hell?
Why do you have blurry sprites?
Is it so hard to copy and paste something into MS Paint?

[J-bit]

You guys will just have to live with the blurry sprites, anyways, speech bubbles and font are better. Nothing on sprites or jokes.