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I'm making a comic Cute so you'll probably hate this but beside's the very long credit's think of it in a good way!


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eh... it has potential
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Lol'd at Sonic
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Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.


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Couldn't help waiting to give out issue 3... A few problems.


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this is so funnyExclamationExclamationExclamation
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#7
Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.
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(08-19-2008, 10:05 AM)J-bit Wrote: Here is comic 2. It is WAY better than the first one.
nevermind
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(08-19-2008, 11:34 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.
Sure.
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(08-19-2008, 11:34 AM)Geo the Fox Wrote: Yeah, it went downhill rather quickly.

Emoticons in text bubbles ("Falco, will you Assist me against this monster? Greater than colon right parentheses.")
Poor jokes.
Colored text bubbles.
Inconsistent text bubbles/colors.
Crap font.
Blurry sprites.
Poor grammar & spelling.
Why the hell does "Cucco" have that red line from Microsoft Word under it? Is that part of the joke?
General attempts at using "randomness" as a source of humor.
Oh, and fourth wall breaking on the first comic. That's never a good sign.

...Fix these few things before you continue.

Pretty much this. I think if you redid the image of it, it'd be a hell of a lot better. Try and be consistant with things such as colour and layout. Also make sure that within the text bubble, all the letters are completely visible, rather than having the end letters cut off slightly. A re-working and it could be good.
Sweetness, I was only joking when I said I'd like to smash every tooth in your head.
Sweetness, I was only joking when I said by rights you should be bludgeoned in your bed.

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you should also invest in photoshop
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(08-19-2008, 11:43 AM)xTYVONx Wrote: you should also invest in photoshop
That's actually what I'm doing right now.
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NO WAY IM HELPING THAT CARNAVOUR

God, learn to spell. If not, use a goddamn spell check.
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#14
What the hell?
Why do you have blurry sprites?
Is it so hard to copy and paste something into MS Paint?
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megazario Wrote:quite amazing good job make up more keep up the good work
plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
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You guys will just have to live with the blurry sprites, anyways, speech bubbles and font are better. Nothing on sprites or jokes.


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