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I like the 4th the most but there shouldn't be any black lines except the outline or the Eyes. Also I have A WIP or a Pirahna Plant.


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Oh whoops, forgot about his mouth, I'll fix it later
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@Green Fire Kirby, That's very good. Round the corner of the lip and add some AA, and then it'll be awsome.

@Rakia, Are you joining?

@KillerAslox, the fourth one is best by far, but make the eyebrows on the inside of the sprite a dark grey.

Also, I worked on the koopa a heck of a lot.To think I was happy with the first one. I Also have the castle tiles.        

Note: FYI, the koopa was moddeled to look like a KA version of the ml:ss koopa. It was not edited in any way.
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Good job on the Koopa. I fixed up the Pirahna Plant's mouth and added shading.


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#20
Looking good. The edge of the lip still needs to be more rounded.
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Green Fire Kirby Wrote:Good job on the Koopa. I fixed up the Pirahna Plant's mouth and added shading.

The line for the mouth is to dark. Just fix that and it'll look great.
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Hey wait, Mr Tick Tocks brows are also black:
http://www.spriters-resource.com/nintend...cktock.png
(and a few more use black in the sprites like lazer kirby (which is there twice xD)
But here is the one with Dark gray (top-right)
(Used a colour from Nightmare)
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idk if I'm joining just felt like helping out a bit.
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(08-14-2008, 08:08 AM)Green Fire Kirby Wrote: I like the 4th the most but there shouldn't be any black lines except the outline or the Eyes. Also I have A WIP or a Pirahna Plant.
WAYYYYYYYYYY to many colors, fix up the lineart, reduce the colors, then it will be up to par.
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I did Yoshi. C+C.
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#26
he seem's abit tall. try to make him a little bit shorter.

other than that. it look's Good.
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I thought so to.
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I think I have to fix his neck area now.

I personally prefer the taller one, as Yoshi is usually huge.
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#28
whatever float's your boat. Smile

i don't know what else i can think of that you can fix other than his nose. the outline on the inside is abit thick.

EDIT: i tried wiggler (right now just the head.)

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C+C is appreciated
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#29
Good. Make the head smaller, but not the flower.
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#30
like this?

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