Olimar and pikmen SSBB style

[Flight Knight]

Here it is

[Battosai Rai]

He is too tall
Pikmin look wierd
He needs alot of work

[ultimakid]

he looks cool

[Chris]

The use of the spraycan from mspaint will usually make your sprite look bad.
You should consider posting it in the other forum, so people with a better eye than me can help you with it.

(Also, it looks like tingle in a space suit.)

[Flight Knight]

yeah spray paint does it bad but i cant make the attacks any better and it is my first time,

So I am guessing it dousnt make Spriters Resource
He does look like tingle in a way

[Chdonga]

It also lacks the number one thing in sprites: shade(ing)
I think you used the MS Paint default colors too.

[Alpha Six]

this is very bad.

[Devicho]

This could use a lot of improvement. I'd recommend reposting this in Sprite Discussion, where you can get some crits on it to help.

[Ton]

Definitely what Devicho said.