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surprisingly well done for an edit. good work.
is it a darkstalkers beat em up? i'm INTRIGUED
edit: there is a fair amount of banding and pillow shading on the body though. legs seem to have the same problem too.
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09-18-2010, 07:58 PM
(This post was last modified: 09-18-2010, 07:59 PM by thernz.)
You have a lot of banding going on. The AA on the tail is a bit strange in some parts too. But yeah, the banding is pretty much the major issue here.
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i don't see anything wrong aside from the fact her fingers look shitty.
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In the first sprite, Felicia's ankle looks broken. That and her face looks a bit like Shoop da Whoop.
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She's supposed to be panicking, and it's a cartoony expression. I think it's fine.
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