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I can't recognize his face and compared to the others he is really small.
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(10-31-2011, 02:06 PM)LDEJRuff Wrote: Machamp is done. How's this so far? Is it great or does it still need work?
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Also, this is my 100th post in the Community board. Time to celebrate. Big Grin
Face is completely deformed, shading is flat, the arms are skeleton-less, he seems to have no muscle or tone, and the proportions are off. Might be easier o start over.
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How about this for Rattata?

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(11-20-2011, 06:49 AM)Perseus Wrote: How about this for Rattata?

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personally, I would probably shade it a bit more, I thought it looked flat.
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does the quote function not work anymore or something?

@Pers neck looks too fat. the tooth and ears could be a little bigger. It does need a bit more shading: focus on shading the bottom of the belly and the back leg slightly. You might also want to have his head looking down toward the opponent's pokemon more. But I really like that pose otherwise.

@alex your point is valid, but your sprite is over-shaded. Also keep in mind that pkmn Yellow style uses no dithering except in rare situations.
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list has been updated. I also threw together a Rhydon.
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in earlier games sometimes to illustrait that a Pokemon is larger it would have an angled view almost like a birds eye view so the sprite would seem as if it didn't have enough room (kinda hard to explain, plus on mobile) this may be a good technique to look into when working on machamp
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First post in here of 2012!

I made a crappy Fearow because bored.

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Wings could use some touch ups, but I rike it
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Yeah. I think the wings are too small, for one thing, and making them bigger should help with most of the rest of the issues.
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With nothing to do for a while, I made some edits to some of the existing Pokemans.

Omaster: Pulled the back of his shell in a bit and fixed a bit of sketchiness in the top right, making his shell look more "round".
Arcanine: Added a bit of shadow under his head to stop him sporting a massive beard. Also altered the shadow on the tail a tad, and added slight shading on the rear legs.
Primape: Tried to enlarge the hands and feet. Not sure how well this worked, though :/

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