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it appears more like a stretching exercise than a kick. The other leg could use more shadow, it looks like a chibi-version of a normal one.
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From what I can see the lower half of his body is too wide he normaly is more skinny then that and arms are a bit twisted foot looks like it could be reworked.

I tried to darken some lines on the upper half of Hitmonchan to try to balance it, and i reworked Machops body to try and make him a bit smaller and look a little more like yellow versions body.
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Bump. Not sure if I like the new location of the Projects, but what can you do?

Sorry, no update yet. But I want to remind everyone that the project's not dead.


(08-22-2010, 12:18 PM)Hoeloe Wrote: Sounds like a good suggestion. I'll give it a shot.

EDIT: Had a go. Still not all that happy with it, but I can't put my finger on what I don't like.

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Pose is a neat idea, but honestly the sprite itself is really bad.

(08-22-2010, 03:41 PM)Kyleglor Wrote: From what I can see the lower half of his body is too wide he normaly is more skinny then that and arms are a bit twisted foot looks like it could be reworked.

I tried to darken some lines on the upper half of Hitmonchan to try to balance it, and i reworked Machops body to try and make him a bit smaller and look a little more like yellow versions body.
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Legs on Hitmonchan are better but something's still off. Machop's body looks great, but his arm muscles could be more toned.
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Machop also has a tail but it's not very noticeable.

I did so VERY minor touch ups on these Pokemon. Things like making Exeggcutor fatter.

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(09-11-2010, 10:46 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: Pose is a neat idea, but honestly the sprite itself is really bad.

Yeah, I made the sprite because I had the idea for the pose, but I didn't really have the motivation to actually make it good.

Might redo it at some point, might just leave it as is for someone else to do.
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(09-12-2010, 01:05 AM)Koopaul Wrote: I did so VERY minor touch ups on these Pokemon. Things like making Exeggcutor fatter.

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I like how the new Onix and Exeggutor look, and the others are improved but could still be better.

I tried a quick touch up on Electabuzz, let me know if it works.
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Posting to try to keep the project alive,
I tried to work with some of it, on Hitmonchan i checked how it looks without the shine on certain body parts, on Machop i added a Tail and tried to give some muscle tone but failed, so i guess ill drop these by.
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If someone would like to work with them or fix them up feel free

Also the shape of electabuzz's lighnting bolt on his chest looks like a sideways H I think it could be reshaped, and bottom of his face is kinda flat, body could be a tad shorter and rounder. but thats just my two cents
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(09-13-2010, 06:46 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: I tried a quick touch up on Electabuzz, let me know if it works.
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Not digging the legs, now. The back leg is probably okay with the shading on the body joint, but I don't think it works very well for the front leg.
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I just spent my time rounding the flatness of Electabuzz's chest and you reversed it? Or is that just the original one you used?
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Yeah I used the original. Oh wow, I didn't even notice you completely changed the body. I was rushing and focusing on the stripes on the chest and legs. derrrp

Now that I'm looking at it, yeah, I like the new body better, but the stripes still need to be fixed.


Side noet: sorry for the lack of sprite contributions on my end. I find my self having little free time these days..
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I started Starmie. it needs a lot of touch ups, but I wanted to put it up for specific c+c.
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The 5-point star at the back is slightly off-centre. It should be downwards more.
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OP is up-to-date now.
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This is community project correct?
So can anyone just help with it.
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If so can i help.
Here is a quick sketch i did.
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Needs serious work like with the front left (our right) leg.
and the paw seems a tad small
The tail has a straight line
and I didn't shade it correctly
So I am getting to work on those mistakes
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That Ratatta also uses basically the same pose we had before. The reason it was removed was because the majority didn't like it standing up, so you may want to redo it.
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