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Neo Kirby X!
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neo kirby,a lazer kirby just with a diffrent name?sounds boring,but his life isn't,he goes through battles adventures and other surprising events!

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PG4
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Zee's edit : Picture stretched board, as such, tags were broken.
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click to enter my site ^

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THIS WILL GET UPDATED WITH ALL MY STUFF SOON ^^^
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#2
1. I can barely read the font...wanna use a text box of some sort?
2. Ugly UGLY Quality. Try saving it in .png
3. What the hell is going on?
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Give me my own member group!
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megazario Wrote:quite amazing good job make up more keep up the good work
plz dont give me a bad point plz for sounding a bit gay here
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#3
You have to get a proper comic flow going. Don't do things without giving explanations. Also, if you have to explain the comic OUTSIDE of the comic itself, then it isn't exactly a good comic.

Also, try and use bigger frames.

And NEVER use text emotes in your dialogues.

And also try and make better punchlines :<
HAVE I BEEN MISLEAD?? [Image: TeamStory.gif] THE DREAM ISN'T DEAD???

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#4
Horrid punchlines that barely make sense, the font makes it almost unreadable, the JPEG quality's really not happening, no one can figure out what's going on, no attempt at grammar, low quality backgrounds.

Some tips
- Try to have some kind of pre-planned point to the whole comic
- Save the issues as a PNG, never a JPEG
- Speech bubbles help make the text stand out
- Use a decent font, BlamBot.com have a bunch of good ones
- The jokes need to actually be funny
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#5
I don't get it.
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#6
This is the best comic ever. I'm swear I'm not being sarcastic.
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#7
kirbyace, I strongly suggest you to

STOP POSTING
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#8
This is the worst thing I've ever seen.

For starters, make every frame the same size and save the comic as a .png format.

Also add proper speech bubbles and make the plot understandable.
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#9
man you people are rude! DX
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click to enter my site ^

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THIS WILL GET UPDATED WITH ALL MY STUFF SOON ^^^
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skink Wrote:kirbyace, I strongly suggest you to

STOP POSTING

Lol! You always crack me up Skink.
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kirbyace Wrote:man you people are rude! DX

Welcome to the internet.
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