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#16
Most things would be a lot better is they were shaded- and remember to hue shift in your palettes.

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#17
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the shading
koopa shells size

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custom kirby:
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ssb items part 2
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#18
(i'm sorry if this is a double post Sad )
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#19
Missing some Melee Taken-out-of-Brawl items
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#20
i'm making more parts to the ssb items charbon so don't worry Tongue
i'll make sure to get every item in all three FROM all three XD
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#21
SSB ITEMS TWO OUT
if i need editing let me know Smile
lol party ball,i know that needs work XD
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#22
the party ball increased its size when opening. The crate should be a cube, not a rectangle faced object. The fire flower's fire looks tiny and the explosions don't look good. Choose less saturated colors (non-MS Paint colors). Metal things has a lot of contrast (changes from light to dark very noticeably).

But I really like the walk cycle of that bob-omb. good job Smile
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#23
gorsal Wrote:the party ball increased its size when opening. The crate should be a cube, not a rectangle faced object. The fire flower's fire looks tiny and the explosions don't look good. Choose less saturated colors (non-MS Paint colors). Metal things has a lot of contrast (changes from light to dark very noticeably).

i think everything looks fine but,if you say so

gorsal Wrote:But I really like the walk cycle of that bob-omb. good job Smile
thanks Tongue
i animated the bomb-omb's walk if anyone wants to see it
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#24
I like how its looking so far. But for things like Pokeballs, Power-ups, The Fire Flower Fire and the End of the Bombomb needs a lil more effects to it. To make it look a lil cooler and nicer. But it looks nice and you are new to Spriting so your doing an Amazing job!
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#25
WindDragon Wrote:I like how its looking so far. But for things like Pokeballs, Power-ups, The Fire Flower Fire and the End of the Bombomb needs a lil more effects to it. To make it look a lil cooler and nicer. But it looks nice and you are new to Spriting so your doing an Amazing job!

thnx ^.^
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#26
I don't think anyone has said this yet, so I think I'll say something.


I see you used the normal white color as your background. It usually is better to use a darker color for the backgrounds. As long as the background isn't 100% white, or 100% black, it is fine. The capsules over there are hard to see in white background. If you used a purple background and gave it a gray outline, it might look a bit better. That is what I would do.

I hope this helps.
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#27
I like that Bomb-Omb.
But evrything needs shading like was already sad.
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#28
I like the bomb-omb as well. I still is blurry though.
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#29
"it" not "i"
and thnx for telling me what i need to work on whale55
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#30
They are starting to look good. some of them need to look more 3d though. for example, turn all the square items into cubes. you could get your refs here. http://www.mariowiki.com/Super_Smash_Bros._Brawl#Items
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