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I revamped that Roxanne I made a few months ago.
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Yeah I can't seem to get the boobs right. Unsure
btw the design is 3 years later from emerald so yeah.
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#2
certainly an improvement. Can I see a ref for the new design?



oh and welcome back
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#3
It doesn't exactly scream "roxanne"

I needs to be a bit more obvious
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#4
I don't have a ref, but I based it off this girl:
http://tinypic.com/r/10zbnzp/6
As well, I fixed her face up.
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#5
I don't like the arm that's not holding the book. it looks too stumpy and awkwardly placed. Also her legs being crossed seems very weird, and her stance seems like she's about to fall over.
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#6
Look at half the girls on this page and tell me that the legs aren't normal
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#7
...the leg seems kinda funny and I'm back from...work, yeah I work now and it's a pain in my ass.
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(12-23-2009, 08:05 PM)Burgermeister Meisterburger Wrote: Look at half the girls on this page and tell me that the legs aren't normal
the legs arent normal, they're a pair of muscle-less sticks compared to any of the girls in said sheet.. also i am not really sure that her hips are right either.
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#9
the pose is possible; try it yourself. it's just pretty uncomfortable and unrealistic.

so yeah, I'd say try changing up the legs a bit.
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#10
Thanks for the crits guys.
I tried my best making the pose more realistic. As well, I also gave meat to the legs.
Made Brendan for the lulz. Roxanne is still a WIP but I need more crit b4 I can go on.
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#11
yghm tried something but I ended nowhere
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