my first scratch sprite

[palamon]

...Well. The outlines aren't good. They look like they could be smoothed out. The stripes inside of the sprite look like they were scribbled in randomly, too. The colors need better contrast, and if you really want it to fit the style, borrow colors from an official sprite. One eye is also larger than the other.

Overall, I think the design is really plain and could look so much better.

(What is with the font, by the way?)

I know you think it is plain.... But its first copy >_< I'll make it better later I don't wanna right now.