Tarkan809 (Player?)

[tarkan809]

Im gonna go out of a whim and say that this is actually pretty bad.
Firstly, we have a colour pallete. Your sprites use none of the colours on it. I'd suggest you go back and look at it.
Secondly, while it's good your character is within the 64x64 limit (for the msot part), he's a tad small.
Thirdly, from what little shading there is, it's either pillowshaded (bad) or has no shading or depth at all.
Fourth, so much stolen content. It's okay to reference things, but this is just flat out stealing srites from other games that don't even resemble the style of TFR.
Fithly, your character is literally the green bird from the angry birds movie. Sheesh.

I'd highly reccomend reading through this and redesigning your character, or at the very least, create original attack sprites and fix his colour pallete.

well... i redesigned my character:




but i accedently made it bigger.

i hope it's good...

Not really. The larger size is a bit nicer (especially since it's within the 64x64 range) but the shading on it is really bad. Pillow shading generally doesn't look nice. And you really didn't listen to what I said about the colour palatte.

Look through this and that'll help you get a better grasp of the colours used in the game.
Also, the wing looks a bit strange and he's still just the green bird from Angry Birds.

oh.i will try another one.

but it may take a while