Valo's Various Pixels

[Valo]

The yellow/orange is a bit blinding. Maybe the orange used to shade it could be a little less saturated? Or whatever you think works best for the style you're going for.

I have to agree, there.

I'll also say, though, that's just a problem with some colors.

What's really sad is the color does work well, it's just so damn bright.
Perhaps try making that bright yellow just a bit less bright, without changing anything else, if possible.
I'd hate to see what this looks like one one of those new LED or Plasma screens that are EXCESSIVELY bright to begin with...

I personally disagree on my own,and after asking a few other 3rd parties, though it is very possibly to vary based on monitor and settings. If either of you have a palette to try i'd gladly give it a go

 a bit of progress