Hypernova Kirby Sprite Sheet

[~Axis~]

Good, good you're improving. Your normal swallow sprites still needs some tweaking. I suggest that you work on the other sprites before going on to the larger sfx (the hyperswallow sfx still isn't appealing. When compared with Kirby, it's just drawn there and looks bland while clashing with the entire style of the sheet. Take a look at some of the sfx sheets on this site for reference if necessary). If the tornado is meant for animation (which it's supposed to be), each tornado sprite should convey some form of motion. Here's an example:



Work some more on the slashing attack sfx too. Otherwise good job. You are improving.

Edit: I made a minor quick edit to one kirby swallow sprite because the mouth looked stretched out when it usually should be wide open. I didn't have much time to make it but this is what I think it should look like.