The Pixels Of Joxon

[StarSock64]

It looks sorta more like you made his eyes have that cartoony one-is-bigger-than-the-other thing instead of actually tilting his body

You can't just have things going straight up and down, like his eyes, or completely horizontal, like his cheek marks, if you want his body to be tilted. They have to be put at an angle.

Note also that I've made his arms and feet follow a similar angle, and I've made the handle of the hammer a more defined stick shape. In your recent edit, the end of the handle just kind of gets bigger. I imagine that was to try to compensate for where kirby's arms were, but the inconsistency was because kirby's arms were in the wrong places, not because the handle needed to change shape.