The Pixels Of Joxon

[Silversea]

I updated the eye a little, with a BOSS meter to fill up so you can engage, well, you know.


And a new mug shot at 4x head size.

Maybe this is just how portraits are done, but it bothers me how you see the far eyebrow but not the eye. It makes the overall impression of the expression sort of...odd. Well, I'd recommend showing more of that eye anyway.

The "boss" text is very hard to read. Fist I'd suggest using a lighter orange or yellow so you can see the letters against the green. Secondly I'd suggest possibly making the letter outline darker so the shapes are clearer.

Sorry if this is blunt and overly negative, I don't have much time today. It is a really good start though.