08-23-2015, 04:56 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-23-2015, 04:58 PM by kidicarus29.)
This is a very nice sketch for an animation! I think the fist return on the jab could be a bit faster considering a jab is a punch made as a way to keep your guard up for as long as possible while attack for as little time as possible. It seems to be a 2 frame hit, but then 4 frames on the return. That could be lessened to 3 or even 2 if it looks right.
I feel like something could be done with the uppercut too, but I'm not sure what. I think it's the fact that there are 2 very similar frames near the end of it where it would connect as a hit that irks me a bit.
Other than that, my only nitpick is that the straight comes from the jab in the animation lol but I'm assuming you strung together these punches to make an example animation showcasing all of the punches.
(Edit: I think his foot shouldn't end up in it's last position until his arm does in the uppercut. It gets there a frame or two before, and it's a bit awkward to see the upper body moving without his legs indicating movement from his hips which generate the power in the punch.)
I feel like something could be done with the uppercut too, but I'm not sure what. I think it's the fact that there are 2 very similar frames near the end of it where it would connect as a hit that irks me a bit.
Other than that, my only nitpick is that the straight comes from the jab in the animation lol but I'm assuming you strung together these punches to make an example animation showcasing all of the punches.
(Edit: I think his foot shouldn't end up in it's last position until his arm does in the uppercut. It gets there a frame or two before, and it's a bit awkward to see the upper body moving without his legs indicating movement from his hips which generate the power in the punch.)