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Roach's slow work
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Depends, The color is ok, but there's something off about it. Maybe the mandibles should be yellow too? I'd make the body bigger also(mid section). And I'm assuming your wing isn't finished.
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I feel like it's trying to be beedrill in terms of body shape and positioning.

Also I'd make the wasp enemy more facing the side like in the original picture, but that all depends on how the game is to be viewed.
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Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-02-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-03-2014, 07:55 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-05-2014, 07:27 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 08-06-2014, 07:42 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-06-2014, 02:13 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Mystie - 08-06-2014, 04:27 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-10-2014, 02:22 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Crappy Blue Luigi - 08-10-2014, 02:30 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-12-2014, 09:46 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Virtuaboy123 - 08-13-2014, 08:41 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-13-2014, 11:07 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-17-2014, 07:55 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-24-2014, 06:40 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Neweegee - 08-25-2014, 06:12 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-26-2014, 08:33 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-26-2014, 11:00 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Neweegee - 08-27-2014, 12:04 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-28-2014, 07:23 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-01-2014, 02:59 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-10-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-17-2014, 11:44 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-18-2014, 08:48 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-19-2014, 11:18 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Medevenx - 09-20-2014, 01:02 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-20-2014, 07:28 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Medevenx - 09-21-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-21-2014, 01:21 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-21-2014, 10:14 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by desgardes - 09-21-2014, 10:25 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-22-2014, 11:14 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-23-2014, 06:11 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-29-2014, 11:10 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by The Ninja Raccoon - 09-29-2014, 11:23 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-29-2014, 11:30 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-05-2014, 11:28 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gors - 10-07-2014, 06:19 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by FarmerM - 10-07-2014, 06:40 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Neslug - 10-07-2014, 12:17 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-08-2014, 12:57 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gors - 10-08-2014, 06:14 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-09-2014, 06:26 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-10-2014, 03:53 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-18-2014, 09:33 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by DragonDePlatino - 10-18-2014, 10:02 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-18-2014, 10:39 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by DragonDePlatino - 10-19-2014, 12:52 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-19-2014, 09:16 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by DragonDePlatino - 10-19-2014, 09:48 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by FarmerM - 10-19-2014, 10:19 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-20-2014, 08:42 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 10-20-2014, 09:15 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-30-2014, 12:48 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-04-2014, 09:18 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-06-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 11-07-2014, 09:27 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by -Ash- - 11-07-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gardow - 11-07-2014, 04:08 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-20-2014, 01:36 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Kyleglor - 12-15-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by link5205 - 12-15-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 03-10-2015, 10:32 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 03-10-2015, 11:25 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 03-13-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 03-15-2015, 01:51 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Lovintendo - 03-15-2015, 02:17 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by SmithyGCN - 03-15-2015, 06:43 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Iceman404 - 03-16-2015, 01:17 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 03-16-2015, 09:41 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gors - 03-16-2015, 10:55 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 03-22-2015, 11:52 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Cyberguy64 - 03-23-2015, 12:17 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 06-14-2015, 04:26 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Cyberguy64 - 06-14-2015, 10:53 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-04-2015, 11:18 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-16-2015, 11:29 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by DragonDePlatino - 07-16-2015, 11:54 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-17-2015, 12:08 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by The Phinx - 07-17-2015, 02:32 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by StarSock64 - 07-17-2015, 03:23 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-18-2015, 12:15 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-23-2015, 07:41 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gors - 07-24-2015, 07:24 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-24-2015, 07:59 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Gors - 07-24-2015, 08:04 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-24-2015, 08:21 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by The Phinx - 07-24-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by SuperWarioWorld - 07-24-2015, 04:15 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-25-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by SuperWarioWorld - 07-25-2015, 05:29 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-15-2015, 02:09 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-22-2015, 09:35 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by kidicarus29 - 08-23-2015, 04:56 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ridge Troopa - 08-24-2015, 08:27 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 08-25-2015, 08:34 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by kidicarus29 - 08-27-2015, 04:00 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-05-2015, 05:24 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by kidicarus29 - 09-05-2015, 02:33 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 09-06-2015, 01:34 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by DarkGrievous7145 - 09-10-2015, 12:20 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 09-10-2015, 08:24 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by StarSock64 - 09-10-2015, 07:01 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-25-2015, 09:32 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-26-2015, 11:12 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-23-2015, 01:11 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 01-02-2016, 08:50 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by recme - 01-03-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 07-27-2016, 06:16 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 07-27-2016, 09:31 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-25-2016, 07:28 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-26-2016, 07:35 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 12-26-2016, 08:06 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-27-2016, 02:45 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-28-2016, 05:17 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 12-29-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 12-29-2016, 08:24 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-24-2017, 09:53 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 10-24-2017, 04:26 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 11-04-2017, 02:21 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Davy Jones - 11-04-2017, 05:37 PM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-12-2018, 10:12 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by Ton - 10-12-2018, 10:50 AM
RE: Roach's slow work - by MotorRoach - 10-12-2018, 07:39 PM

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