Newee's Sprite Thread: Featuring Sprites!

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Something was bugging me a little about your Kirby, it didn't seem quite...Kirby-like, and I think I've figured out what it is. I made an edit to illustrate.



Kirby's face-to-body ratio is not right, considering most Kirby official sources. In your sprite, the face takes up way too much space (or conversely, the body is too small.)

In my example, I made his body bigger, but I guess making his eyes smaller could also work.

Another thing I noticed, is that you made his arm/hands like blobs (i.e. very round), where they are usually (see aforementioned sources) depicted more like nubs (i.e. larger curve radius.)

Oh, also you used sel-out, but the lighter outlines are on the opposite side of the light-source, which doesn't make too much sense.

There's something odd about the shoes/feet, but I can't exactly put my finger on it.

Hope this helps!