Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Virt's Spriting Mishaps
#20
The curve in the jawline is too pronounced and the jawline rises too near to the ear. The eye seems misplaced in the face (maybe a bit small too), like it isn't following the perspective/angle it is at. Generally you can still improve the proportions, by raising the nose, chin and mouth a bit?
The cloak/purple thing doesn't drape very naturally. Note how it tumbles almost in a slight curve (more or less straight). I think the bow could benefit being to the right, as it's pretty redundant being hidden by the arm.

Keep going!

[Image: x1aIZ2e.gif]
YOU HAVE TO FEEL WHAT YOU DRAW, FEEL
[Image: shrine.gif]






Reply
Thanked by: Virt, Paladin, recme


Messages In This Thread
Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 07-06-2014, 01:24 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Koh - 07-07-2014, 12:10 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Paladin - 07-07-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 07-26-2014, 01:07 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virtuaboy123 - 07-26-2014, 04:10 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 07-26-2014, 07:51 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-26-2014, 04:41 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-26-2014, 06:38 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-26-2014, 07:00 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by recme - 11-26-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-26-2014, 08:04 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-26-2014, 08:08 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-26-2014, 09:00 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-26-2014, 09:14 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-27-2014, 06:57 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-27-2014, 09:55 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Paladin - 11-27-2014, 09:59 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-27-2014, 10:23 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Chris2Balls [:B] - 11-27-2014, 07:03 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 11-28-2014, 07:58 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Pik - 11-28-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by Virt - 02-07-2015, 09:19 PM
RE: Virt's Spriting Mishaps - by DragonDePlatino - 02-07-2015, 10:53 PM

Forum Jump: