Virt [PLAYER]

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Great work so far!

Pointers for the portrait:
Looks like you're going for a Jojolion/Steel Ball Run style.
The smile isn't typical of the style - think more of a fashion model pout or of a neutral expression. I'd separate the eyes a tiny bit more, too.
Don't bother with secondary lighting, or any strong highlights.
Vary your cross-hatching patterns, and don't be afraid to use longer and flatter lines. The sprite will need areas of flat colour to rest the eyes.
Rely on the graphical boldness of the black and white manga as a base, the rest will follow.

Keep it up