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Criticism on my GBC sprites?
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The biggest problem I'm seeing in your sprites is your shapes. Kirby's feet, particularly in the flying sprite, look like blocks. Kirby's standing sprite looks like a good circle, but his guarding sprite gives him a rocky kind of shape. Also, when Kirby flies, his feet are usually more far back than that. Don't use the circle tool at all. The name "Kirby" in the sheet is very hard to read because the lighter shade of black blends in withe the outline. You might want to define Kirby's shape more. On his blocking sprite, his body shape is like a rock, as I stated before, but, his right arm(our left) is completely flush with the side of his body, which makes no sense. Kirby's shape can be pretty inconsistent at some points as well. For example, the two frames of his victory poses look completely different. Other than that, you're off to a good start!
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Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 01-20-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 04:32 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 01-20-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-21-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-08-2014, 03:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 02-08-2014, 08:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Garamonde - 02-08-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-20-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-21-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-22-2014, 04:35 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Paladin - 02-23-2014, 03:33 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 05:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-26-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-27-2014, 02:11 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 02-27-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-06-2014, 09:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 03-07-2014, 12:49 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-09-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Goemar - 03-10-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-19-2014, 04:23 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-21-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-23-2014, 01:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quotient - 03-23-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-24-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Mr. Jam - 03-24-2014, 07:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-15-2014, 12:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by orochii - 04-15-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 04-16-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-16-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-13-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-15-2014, 05:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-17-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-19-2014, 07:33 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-19-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 05-21-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-20-2014, 05:15 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-20-2014, 08:36 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-21-2014, 07:55 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-21-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-22-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-26-2014, 06:21 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-26-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 06-12-2014, 01:48 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 06-12-2014, 02:34 PM

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