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Criticism on my GBC sprites?
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As a matter of fact, yes. That said, the other sprites have problems, too.
First row: Kirby's arms are too pointy, last sprite has an unusual corner on the top left of Kirby's head/body.

Second row: Crouching Kirby; the top of his head/body goes flat all of a sudden, where it should be more of a horizontal ellipse (stretches as much up as it does down, and as much right as it does left). His leg has a strange shape on the second to last frame, and the back part of his body doesn't seem round on the last frame (as if somebody took a bite out of him or something.)

Third row: The first couple of sprites seems to be leaning forward a little too much. On the last pair (i.e. floating), his body seems uneven at the bottom once more, and his arms aren't exactly round. Also on the last sprite, the top of his head isn't smooth at all-- in fact, all of the corners are kind of angular.

Fourth row: For the first sprite, arms don't seem like limbs, more like they're just growing out of his head; also, his feel seems to be growing out of a strange angle. For the second sprite, His body isn't round once more, and the visible arm is pretty much rectangular.

Fifth row: For the sucking animation, his arms are rectangular once more. The defending pose is a little better, but the arm still strikes me as too square. Same with the slide. : |

Hopefully that covers it. Again, Kirby seems like the sort of character you ought to sprite by parts. Don't lose heart!
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Messages In This Thread
Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 01-20-2014, 03:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-20-2014, 04:32 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 01-20-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 01-21-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-08-2014, 03:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 02-08-2014, 08:55 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Garamonde - 02-08-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-20-2014, 07:24 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-21-2014, 06:05 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-22-2014, 04:35 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 11:58 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Paladin - 02-23-2014, 03:33 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-23-2014, 03:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-23-2014, 05:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 02-26-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 02-27-2014, 02:11 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 02-27-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-06-2014, 09:59 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Vipershark - 03-07-2014, 12:49 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-09-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Goemar - 03-10-2014, 10:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-19-2014, 04:23 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-21-2014, 05:49 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-23-2014, 01:44 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quotient - 03-23-2014, 02:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 03-24-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Mr. Jam - 03-24-2014, 07:30 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-15-2014, 12:52 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by orochii - 04-15-2014, 09:38 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 04-16-2014, 06:27 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 04-16-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-13-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-15-2014, 05:02 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-17-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-19-2014, 07:33 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-19-2014, 08:29 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Iocus - 05-21-2014, 08:13 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-20-2014, 05:15 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-20-2014, 08:36 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-21-2014, 07:55 AM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-21-2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-22-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 05-26-2014, 06:21 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Kelvin - 05-26-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by Quirby64 - 06-12-2014, 01:48 PM
RE: Criticism on my GBC sprites? - by E-Man - 06-12-2014, 02:34 PM

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