09-30-2013, 09:53 PM
The first things that jump out at me at the tiling in the sky. In something that is the focus of the picture, you don't really want it to be too apparent that you're flipping around and reusing segments to finish the picture.
You seem to have trouble when it comes to texturing. Looking at the grass and the rocks, they don't look like grass and rocks. The rocks look almost like wood and the grass looks a bit like a towel. Having defined lines (such as the green line denoting the horizon) also takes away from it.
Basically, you need to choose your light source (the setting sun, obviously) and figure out how that light would spread through this landscape. Secondly, consider the palette. With the sun that low in the sky, why would the sky be bright blue? it would be deep into oranges and pinks and purples by now.
You seem to have trouble when it comes to texturing. Looking at the grass and the rocks, they don't look like grass and rocks. The rocks look almost like wood and the grass looks a bit like a towel. Having defined lines (such as the green line denoting the horizon) also takes away from it.
Basically, you need to choose your light source (the setting sun, obviously) and figure out how that light would spread through this landscape. Secondly, consider the palette. With the sun that low in the sky, why would the sky be bright blue? it would be deep into oranges and pinks and purples by now.