Nick's Pixels'n'stuff

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I agree.
I made an edit to your car.


The problem was definitely the front wheel being too far back, so I moved it a few pixels forward.
I also made an edit to the grille because it was too big.

Edit- I had nothing better to do and your car was obviously meant to be a Ford Crown Victoria, so I sprited one using a side view reference from an actual Crown Vic.

The shading and some of the lineart is pretty terrible, but the proportions are all correct.
Feel free to edit this and use it however if you want. Hopefully it helps.

The biggest problem though is that nothing seems to go together. You've got your sonic-y looking background in the background, then in front of that are buildings that are just kind of.... there.
In front of those are your regular old reddish brown bricks, which abruptly go into those sonic-y looking triangle brick things, which instantly turn into those different, larger bricks with the large amounts of grout and there's really no transitions between anything so it all clashes really hard and to be honest, looks really busy and bad.
None of it really fits together.