03-18-2009, 08:08 AM
The legs are too short. The shading is poorly defined, is it coming from the left or from above? The hair is a noisy mess, they lack faces, their clothes are too boring and they entirely lack left arms (their left, our right).
Your main problem is that they lack faces right now. It's impossible to tell what they're facing or looking at without some facial structure, thus why Malb thought you were using two perspectives in one subject (not saying it can't be done, but it does require a talented artist to pull off appropriately).
Your main problem is that they lack faces right now. It's impossible to tell what they're facing or looking at without some facial structure, thus why Malb thought you were using two perspectives in one subject (not saying it can't be done, but it does require a talented artist to pull off appropriately).