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Just because you have some sort of problem with me doesn't make the feeling mutual. Remember, I tried to help. I'm still willing to.

0. Make the text consistent. There's no more context required for this.

1. Off-Model: the arms are too thin, the ears are the wrong shape and don't have the "ear gap" between them in some cases. The height feels incorrect.

2. Empty space: You could cut down on the irrelevant sprites and reorganise the Victini-specific content to fully fit the sheet.

3. The pixel art: Simply, look again at the sprite you used at inspiration. The official art too. The main issues with it are the proportions and the ears are incorrectly placed.

4. See if you can find any of Victini's animations from the anime to help expand the sheet. I'm sure there's a myriad of Youtube videos on the subject.
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what's wrong with ???? (dead) - by DogToon64 - 07-08-2020, 03:18 PM
RE: what's wrong with victini? - by Paraemon - 07-08-2020, 03:28 PM
RE: what's wrong with victini? - by Spriter Theo - 07-08-2020, 07:11 PM
RE: what's wrong with victini? - by DogToon64 - 07-09-2020, 07:41 AM
RE: what's wrong with victini? - by Spriter Theo - 07-09-2020, 10:55 PM

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