08-05-2015, 08:47 AM
I like it a lot! It'd be really cool if you made it into a full spritesheet.
But in the run animation, you should have Finn's back/left arm move farther forward, since right now it doesn't match the way his front/right arm moves. It's very noticeable in this frame, which also has another problem:
![[Image: Walk_it_out_strip2.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fs30.postimg.org%2Fw76nv79h9%2FWalk_it_out_strip2.png&hash=8a310aad5e099469064011252b00a68c)
I don't think his body needs to move forward right here, so you should push it back to where it is in the rest of the animation(one pixel back).
After that, you should get rid of a few lighting inconsistencies on Finn's legs and hat.
![[Image: Walk.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fs30.postimg.org%2Fhzgz6jwsd%2FWalk.gif&hash=bd625f4c52ee367bedc823f1a7c40eea)
I think it should look like this(not this slow, of course)
But in the run animation, you should have Finn's back/left arm move farther forward, since right now it doesn't match the way his front/right arm moves. It's very noticeable in this frame, which also has another problem:
I don't think his body needs to move forward right here, so you should push it back to where it is in the rest of the animation(one pixel back).
After that, you should get rid of a few lighting inconsistencies on Finn's legs and hat.
I think it should look like this(not this slow, of course)