03-30-2014, 09:56 PM
Oh hey! Nice to see you around here!
Well, for starters, you use WAY too many shades, and they all are WAY too similar. I'd start by either making each shade stand out more or flat out remove some of them. Though most of the problems comes from the fact that even the lightest shades are ridiculously dark. You may want to lighten those up a bit anyway.
![[Image: teddd.png]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/94723731/teddd.png)
Here, I just lightened things up a bit. The shading itself is left intact.
(Also, try to avoid making your outline pure black, as paint often reads transparency as pure black. Try to use really dark blue/purple next time.)
(03-30-2014, 08:07 AM)ClubbyBear Wrote: EDIT: Update on shading.
![[Image: Dca4ROM.png]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FDca4ROM.png&hash=456a0b191a78f8f8541a56e4ee3b8947)
Well, for starters, you use WAY too many shades, and they all are WAY too similar. I'd start by either making each shade stand out more or flat out remove some of them. Though most of the problems comes from the fact that even the lightest shades are ridiculously dark. You may want to lighten those up a bit anyway.
Here, I just lightened things up a bit. The shading itself is left intact.
(Also, try to avoid making your outline pure black, as paint often reads transparency as pure black. Try to use really dark blue/purple next time.)
![[Image: tumblr_npvw95As6k1tzzv2wo1_540.gif]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2F33.media.tumblr.com%2Fca6aa2f9da0e8140db92b4453c512537%2Ftumblr_npvw95As6k1tzzv2wo1_540.gif&hash=e1ec15386f8bf13da99b104b7c880114)